Janice Harayda
Jul 24, 2023

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This device works really well throughout, Barry. Sometimes people break their stories up into so many sections and with so many numbers or jazzy bullet points that it becomes distracting, but not here. The sub-sub-heads are used perfectly.

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Janice Harayda
Janice Harayda

Written by Janice Harayda

Critic, novelist, award-winning journalist. Former book editor of the Plain Dealer and book columnist for Glamour. Words in NYT, WSJ, and other major media.

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