‘Loser Leads’ That Turn Off Editors

5 types of flat, dull, or trite first lines for articles

Janice Harayda

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Nobody dumps Gatorade on the writing coaches at newspapers who have tried to help reporters turn out sparkling copy amid the apocalypse for the print media. But Jack Hart, a writing teacher and former managing editor at the Oregonian, seems to have deserved that treatment.

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Janice Harayda

Critic, novelist, award-winning journalist. Former book editor of the Plain Dealer and book columnist for Glamour. Words in NYT, WSJ, and other major media.